Monday, September 23, 2013

D&E Plot - WARNING, Dark Content

    This kind of a thing I do. I create plots for my characters, and I spew them all over blogs. It just happens. Brain spweing. I'm sorry. :) Well, I feel sorry that you have to see this. My mind's a terrible place divided into two sectors - the happy, mischevious, light-hearted side, and the twisted, mischevious, dark-oriented side. Side A includes pranks, light dirty jokes, and the smell of milk on warm puppies. Side B includes prostitutes, war, rebellion, and forbidden love.

Outside Story;
  • Mute fiddler
  • Sees pretty girl/dancer
  • Sees stupid attractive guy talking to girl
  • Drowns out guy's words with music
  • The two dance away

Dmitri & Evelyn; (Rated R)
    Timeline; Second time he sees her after separation
  • Goes to rebel encampment for first time ever, trying to convince self he's not just here to hopefully overhear & see Eve
  • Gets within territory, gets mauled by a couple of idiots who realize he's a foreigner (Not necessarily realize he's Russian)
    • They cut out his vocal cords as a warning
  • Semi-heals, stumbles into camp with violin and ragged, bloody clothes (looks even more like one of them!)
  • Finds big-boss-man tent (Head (young) boss man and sub-head man (older and grizzled)), leans outside, rosins bow as he eavesdrops
  • Big boss men just finishing inside, pop out, see Dom
    • Advance on him, having not seen him before
    • Push him against tent, D awkwardly half supported
      • Alerted to activity, a man (tanner) emerges from next tent
    • Young head of operation asks where he's from
    • D can't answer
    • Young H.O. pissed, even more suspicious, grabs him by shirt scruff
      •  (would have grabbed him by hair, but found D was too tall)
    • Old H.O. stops younger, opens D's mouth
      • "Still has his tongue, but no vocal cords. 'Looks like he got on the wrong side of a knife."
    • Younger scowls, questions his nationality
    • Older about to check - Russian Orthodox circumcised 
    • Dom makes weird noise
  • Older man just stops and laughs
    • "Not worth it!"
  • Younger boots him in the butt, sends him stumbling off
    • Tosses violin after him
    • Violin splinters 



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